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Some people think that teaching methodology in the classroom should be based on experiential learning. While others believe that traditional approach is still the best. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?

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According to many, educating methodology in the class ought to be practical, whereas others group opinion that conventional
approach
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successful
 path.
This
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 of a
theory
.
However
, conventional learning merely teaches
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, without realising
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 practical learning could be problematic. To initiate with, one of the biggest advantages of practical learning is educating students in the real-life application of
theory
. Pragmatic learning is the path, which could assist
studnets
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students
 to develop new ideas, products or services;
therefore
, it would contribute to
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society, country, and even the professional community.
In addition
, most of the developed economies follow
this
approach
, which has produced numerous scientists, philosophers,and scholars as it encourages innovation.
That is
 why
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 most of the scholars live in these places from various parts of the world where
this
 method is followed. The United States of America,
for instance
, has contributed most scholars in the different fields of
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knowledge and many
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scientist
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 have settled there, who have significant
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 in these fields.
Therefore
, practical learning’s contribution is
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imminent
immense
.
In contrast
,
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theoretical
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approach
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 people is
also
 vital as it focuses on
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concept
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. Without understanding, implementation of a
theory
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society;
therefore
, understanding concepts is a necessity before practical implementation;
nevertheless
, just memorising concepts
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 not provide any fruit as students find it boring and forget concepts
as a result
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For example
,
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the United Arab Emirates has
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apporach
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 for their education, which has not produced any well-known scientist for the society according to the source of the daily Khaleez in
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 century. To conclude,
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approach
 is the best as it encourages the application of
theory
 in real-life and
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 new thought, which is critical in my view.
On the other hand
,
theory
 understanding is vital before implementation,
although
 it discourages
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 and their understanding due to
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 of application.
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