During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter -remind him when and where you met -tell him what kind of job you are interested in -say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding the role of a hotel manager at your hotel in Dubai;
thereafter
, you advised me to write an email for
a
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possible employment opportunities. Our meeting happened
last
week while you were
traveling
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to Dhaka on the same flight of Emirates. My seat was just beside yours, and you asked me questions about my food choices and preferences. Later, you discussed with me an opportunity. Running the business operation and reporting on the key performance indicators interest me most as it serves the interest of various stakeholders of a business in my view.
Therefore
, the number of goals can be fulfilled by the
mangers
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of the organization at ease. My suitability for the position can be compared to the numerous job seekers based on the foreign qualification, experience and understanding of the hotel business;
therefore
, provides substantial growth in my past two managerial roles.
Consequently
, my demand for
this
role is justified. I am awaiting your response. Yours faithfully, Ryan Smith
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