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Social
media
 has changed the world forever and has become something that most people cannot live without . It has created a global village and brought the planet together unlike anything else in recent years. Social
media
 is one inseparable part of
the
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most
teens
` life. On the surface, social
media
 looks perfect
however
 how beneficial is it really? Social
media
 has lots of benefits for its users.
Firstly
, it helps with studies. The students can do researches and talk to other students and teachers.
Secondly
,
The
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social
media
 boosts
self-esteem
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 of some
teens
. It provides platforms
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teens
 can express themselves.
However
, it seems that social
media
also
 has its disadvantages. Critics of social
media
 Argue that
teens
 can be exposed to cyberbullying. They can become the subject of attacks can lead to stress.
In addition
, social
media
 can be a distraction. The
teens
 that use it can neglect school work and fall behind in class. All Things Considered , we can see
although
 social
media
 offers us incredible possibilities it's
also
 a tool that needs to be used sensibly.
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