You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter -say where you think you left the papers -explain why they are so important -tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing you to inform
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my official network diagram was lost while I was participating
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a conference at your motel on the 16th of
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month. As per my realization, I lost it on
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conference room number 203 as I was carrying
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critical document with me to absorb related materials. After returning to my room,
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official
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meeting was held on that particular day, which took my attention away from
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document. That report contains the IT structure of my bank, which could create havoc in the financial industry, in case, it goes to corrupt hands;
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, your kind attention is required to regain
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evidence back, which will be beneficial to save my job.
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, it is an original report that ought
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be misplaced. Checking lost stuff that was deposited by your
staffs
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on that day at your motel must assist, and my offer for returning
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evidence for your employee is $500. My
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visit
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your resort is
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the 25th of
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month. I am awaiting your response. Yours faithfully, Ryan Smith
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