In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via Internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion?

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Due to the covid-19, more and more
people
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are willing to put their bias of online activities aside and turn to
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with
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through the internet. The chance of getting infected is reduced.
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, that phenomenon
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weakens the intimacy between
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. Is that really a trend worth encouraging? The following will be my perspectives focusing on the merit and demerit of that social change. The
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and foremost problem of the decrease in face-to-face contact is alienation. Not only does that happen in social situations, but
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happen among family members. In order not to waste commuting time,
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accept that the affection of your beloved one can be separated by a cold screen. What will the definition of reunion change over time? If face-to-face contact with your family members can be replaced, does the importance of physical touch still exist?
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, some
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have to be split away for some
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. I consider online interaction can enhance their affection without a doubt. Not to mention business purposes, I think the efficiency of commercial meetings will be the top principle. No longer do
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need to spend time breaking ice, they can directly get to the point.
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busy entrepreneur, he or
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can arrange meetings
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. Simply put, online communication can be widely applied to the business field. Multiple advantages are obvious.
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, in
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’s personal lives, online contact can only make up for someone they are forced to separate.

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