You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter -explain why you should like the job -give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ -say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding your published advert to recruit a person to look after your six-year-aged children. My eligibility for

this

post is explained below. My interaction with young people is trained in the developed world, and I relish children's companionship from my early childhood.

Besides

enjoyment, my experience dealing with teenagers came from an earlier experience as a teacher in the local primary school of my own country;

consequently

, my affection for kids forces me to apply for

this

opportunity. My qualification and relevant training are completed in Perth, Australia at a community college;

therefore

, I am already aware of societal norms and responsibilities for the locals.

Thus

, my application ought to get special consideration of yours, in my view. My leisure time will be spent

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visiting friends in Sydney, who go out almost every weekend.

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, my fascination

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drawing

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can be explored

further

by admitting myself

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the regional art’s college and performing

household

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task

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yours

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. I am awaiting your response. Yours faithfully, Marry