The bar char illustrates the popularity of five famous instagram account such as ( Ciristiano Ronaldo , The Rock , Ariana Grande , Kylie Jenner , Selena Gomez ) in the specific years ( 2018 and 2021) unit is measured in million.

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The bar chart given illustrates the number of Instagram followers of five celebrities in the years 2018 and 2021 in
million
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. Overall, all of them have an increasing trend.
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, among all of them, Cristiano Ronaldo has the most followers, and
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the most growth. In 2018, Selena Gomez, the most popular one, stood at about 125
million
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, which was about 30
million
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more than Kylie Jenner. The
second
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most popular celebrities were Cristiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande, with 110
million
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followers. The rock had about 90
million
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fans, which was the lowest number among the five.
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, in 2021 Cristiano Ronaldo has the most rate of raising and exceeded the others, with about 315
million
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. Selena Gomez has less growth, and now she has About 240
million
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fans which is the lowest number in 2021. The other three almost has the same rates and they stand at about 250
million
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now.
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