The ease of international travel and the spread of various kinds of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

International travelling has become affordable for most
people
in developed
countries
and the spread of mass
media
even reached the whole world.
This
phenomenen
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phenomenon
leads to a better knowledge of the way of life of other
nations
. But do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? The advantage of touring around all over the world is that
people
from different
nations
and cultures come together and understand each other much better.
For example
,
travelers
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from rich
countries
see for themselves how poor citizens live and
as a
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they reflect on their own wealth.
On the other hand
, the various kinds of mass
media
all over the world allow
people
of different social classes to inform
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themselves
theirselves
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how other persons live. Having the opportunity of watching TV-
programms
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programs
programmes
of other
countries
keeps us aware of what is going on elsewhere. Nowadays the internet enables us to get much more information about other
nations
than we ever did.
Nevertheless
, there are not only advantages. International travelling
also
causes problems between different cultures when
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don't respect the way of living and traditions of the residents of the visited
countries
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their religious attitudes. The widespread of mass
media
leads the poorer society to the knowledge of how more comfortable richer
nations
live, what they eat or what kind of wealth they possess.
This
fact often makes
people
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jealous
and give rise to anger and disappointment. It is certainly one reason for the huge amount of refugees coming from Africa to Europe in the hope of a better life. To sum up, even though there are a lot of disadvantages, I think that the advantages outweigh them. In times of modern techniques and
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there is a better understanding
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each other than we had in the past.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural exchange
  • Globalization
  • Stereotypes
  • Tourism industry
  • Cross-cultural communication
  • Economic disparity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Ecological footprint
  • Ethnocentrism
  • Pandemic
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Sustainable travel
  • Geopolitical
  • Multiculturalism
  • International cooperation
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