Many industrialized
countries
are becoming an ageing
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, which holds an increasing
number
of populations in old
age
.
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this
trend is likely to be seen as
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drawbacksFix the agreement mistake
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, there are apparently
both
pros and cons. A
society
with a considerate
number
of elder adults can not only lead to a well-matured
democracy
but
also
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with building multilateral cooperation between
nations
.
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instance
, a
population
with a lot of
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direction.
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, since the growing
population
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to require the economic expansion of
nations
, a steady
population
late would facilitate maintaining the international bond in various global
issues
.
On the other hand
, the high
ratio
of elderly
people
can cost extra
pension
,
as well as
reduce the total
income
from working
age
.
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working
people
will reduce the amount of
income
and make it difficult to economically
support
the old with a
pension
many industrialized
countries
are becoming an ageing
society
, which holds an increasing
number
of populations in old
age
.
While
this
trend is likely to be seen as
socialCorrect article usage
show examples
drawbacksFix the agreement mistake
show examples
, there are apparently
both
pros and cons. A
society
with a considerate
number
of elder adults can not only
leadsCorrect subject-verb agreement
show examples
a well-matured
democracy
but
also
help with building multilateral cooperation between
nations
.
For
instance
, a
population
with a lot of
the Correct article usage
show examples
old would make
a Correct article usage
show examples
better political
decisionFix the agreement mistake
show examples
, which
turnsWrong verb form
show examples
our
democracy
toChange preposition
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aCorrect article usage
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right direction.
In addition
, since the growing
population
tendCorrect subject-verb agreement
show examples
to require the economic expansion of
nations
, a steady
population
late would facilitate maintaining the international bond in various global
issues
.
On the other hand
, the high
ratio
of elderly
people
can cost extra
pension
,
as well as
reducesCorrect subject-verb agreement
show examples
the total
income
from working
age
. The fewer working
people
will reduce the amount of
income
and make it difficult to economically
support
the old with a
pension
.
For example
, some
countries
diminished the
pension
price or even abolished
one
due to
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demographical
changes
.
Besides
, there is a high possibility that a
country
will become very conservative with a great
number
of
people
. An older
country
tends to make radical
changes
in
policies
and may spend more money on social
welfare
than childcare
support
.
For
instance
, Japan is
one
of the ageing societies and its
policies
are inclined to elderly concerns ,not the young,
such
as immigrant policy or
pension
budget.
Thus
, if the
ratio
of old
people
increases in the total national
population
, the
country
will have
both
advantages and disadvantages. It will
cause
a better democratic and cooperative
society
,
on the contrary
, it will
cause
several
issues
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maintaining economics and social
welfare
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For example
, some
countries
diminished the
pension
price or even abolished
one
due to
the Correct article usage
show examples
demographical
changes
.
Besides
, there is a high possibility that a
country
will become very conservative with a great
number
of
people
. An older
country
tends to make radical
changes
in
policies
and may spend more money on social
welfare
than childcare
support
.
For
instance
, Japan is
one
of Change preposition
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the
agingChange the spelling
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societies and its
policies
are inclined to elderly concerns ,not the young,
such
as immigrant policy or
pension
budget.
Thus
, if the
ratio
of old
people
increases in the total national
population
, the
country
will have
both
advantages and disadvantages. It will
cause
a better democratic and cooperative
society
,
on the contrary
, it will
cause
several
issues
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maintaining economics and social
welfare
.