Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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few decades due to human creates

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disaster

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wild

animals

has been effected on nature and

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environment

environments

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.

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,some individuals believe the authority ought to

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and spend money to save

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wildlifes

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wildlife

.others argue that it is better to

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on

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how to reduce the human population.

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,I am in agreement

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that

government

should involve and

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allocation for

protceting

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protecting

wildlfe

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wildlife

wide

.To illustrate

this

provides sufficient

allowcation

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allocation

to save wildlife and create huge inhabitable land for

animals

.

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to explain my opinions following

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. To commence with,despites individuals steps

goverments

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governments

government

should come forward to protect our natural

wildlfe

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wildlife

wide

.

in

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recent research illustrated that

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is one of the top vulnerable

conutry

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country

for the effect of climate change.

for instance

,

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few decades lots of birds and some of

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common

animals

has

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been

extinted

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extended

existed

extinct

for the

effcet

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effect

of climate change.

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of small rivers

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be vanished.

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,

government

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must provide sufficient allocation for saving

animals

.

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, we have to ensure inhabitable living for the

animals

by which they can able to breeding

savely

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safely

.

for example

,in

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lost

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of gust birds came from

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Siberia

savers

.

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,we

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those for our happiness.in recent year the number of gust birds has been reduced significantly.

government

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should make plans for saving our wildlife and ensure suitable living . To summarise,wildlife is very important for saving nature.

extinting

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existing

exciting

animals

are not good

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that

impact

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on climate change.

furthermore

,

government

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should take action to eliminate the number of

animals

hunter

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hunted

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and create new

habitat

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.