Many people today are choosing to travel to other countries. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development?
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life
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and increased
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cultures
countries
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person
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life style
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lifestyle
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the motherland
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instance
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as
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the whole
Earth
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resources
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beneficial
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life
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