Now a days, public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think it is happening? How can this problem be solved.

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PUBLIC TRANSPORT IS THE COMMON WAY OF TRAVELLING AROUND THE WORLD. IN RECENT DAYS THERE IS RAISING FEATURE OF ITS COST.

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ABOUT THE REASONS FOR ITS HAPPENING AND

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THE SOLUTIONS

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THE PROBLEMS.

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, DUE TO THE

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IMPACT THE RESOURCES PEOPLE WHO NEED MORE AND MORE

FUEL

DUE TO THEIR OWN VEHICLE AND SOME OF THE

TECHNOLOYCAL

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LESS AMOUNT OF

FUEL

CAN LEAD TO INCREASE THAT PRICES BY THE COUNTRY CAUSE

CONSUMTION

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CONSUMPTION

IS HIGHER THAN RESOUCE AMOUNT.

FOR INSTANCE

, A DECADE AGO THE PETROLEUM PRICE WAS VERY SMALLER THAN RECENT PRICES AND A FEW AMOUNT OF PERSONAL

VEHICLES

WERE USED TO COMMUTE. TO RESOLVE

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ISSUE PROMOTE

FUEL FREE

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VEHICLES

SUCH

AS BICYCLES AND ALTERNATIVE TRANSPORTS

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AS SOLAR POWER REMOTED

VEHICLES

. SOME ADVERTISEMENTS CAN BE MADE BY

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TO BOOST THE PEOPLES

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METHODAS

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METHODS

INSTEAD

OF USING

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VEHICLE

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SUCH

AS POSTING

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AND ETC.

MOREOVER

, PAYING ATTENTION WITH LESS PRODUCTION OF

FUEL

USEING

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USING

VEHICLES

THIS

WOULD

ALSO

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PUBLIC

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MIND. IN CONCLUSION, USING ALTERNATIVE METHODS OF USING

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FUEL FREE

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VEHICLES

AND PROMOTE PEOPLE TO ADORE THEM IS THE BEST WAY FOR RAISING

PRICE

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THE PRICE

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OF PUBLIC TRANSPORT.

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Now a days, public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think it is happening? How can this problem be solved.

Your opinion

The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However some say that young people can also take the lead of organisations or companies. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?