You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also suggest any improvements to make things better.

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Dear Sir, I hope
this
letter finds you in a good health.
Firstly
, I would like to thank you for your arrangement and creative ideas for decoration for my birthday celebration day. I would say we had a fantastic moment with delicious cuisine by getting the warmest customer care from your subordinates that were trained by professionals for sure. The weather on the rooftop was terrific and it was really matched with my birthday theme. Again, I would like to say special thanks for all of your arrangements and it was beyond my expectation.
However
, I would like to suggest some areas that still need to improve in order to get more traffic of footprints by arranging free snacks like popcorn, providing disposal hand towels on bathroom and
finally
, putting suggestion box on the exit door to get the honest feedback from customers. By doing so, your restaurant is definitely the five-star rating on the social media review as well as words of mouth on the middle ages. Looking forward to seeing from you with more and more successful improvement. Yours faithfully, Honey Linn
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