You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain how you were helped • State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to you to praise one of your
staffs
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named Stephen due to my recent experience at your outlet. My experience is as follows: I visited your customer service department on the 15th of June to claim the warranty of an oven, which was procured almost a year ago. Your staff Stephen has offered an incredible example of customer service
that is
rare
now-a-days
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. My purchase of the oven
in
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the
last
year was found faulty;
therefore
, I returned my purchase as it was within the warranty period, and Stephen served me with my transaction receipt.
Subsequently
, he contacted the supplier and managed
replacement
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of the product;
thereafter
, he contacted me to return my oven. His sense of responsibility surprises me.
Mouth
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of words is the best advert tool for any business;
consequently
, I already mentioned
numerous
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local friends about my customer service experience in your outlet.
Therefore
, it ought to assist you to increase your annual turnover.
Furthermore
, I will publish my incident in the local newspaper to enhance your business reputation. I am awaiting your response in case you require any clarification regarding
this
. Yours faithfully, Ryan Smith
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