The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map provided the changes
of
West Change preposition
in
Park
Secondary School
which occurred from 1950 to 2010.
First, houses and farmland were replaced significantly. The houses were replaced by the
car Correct article usage
a
park
and a science block was built next
to the school
. Among all facilities and fields, farmland was changed the most, it was refurbished into a sports field in1980. After that, it became the extension of the car park
in 2010.
Furthermore
, due to
the expansion of the car park
during the given period, the sports field and the playground were shrunk to approximately half the size.
Finally
, the science block had remained the same size since it was added by the side of the main building of the school
between 1980 and 2010.
In summary, the location of the main road and the school
did not have modification
. Fix the agreement mistake
modifications
Although
the science block was built and it
remained Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
size, other fields had an obvious transformation.Correct your spelling
that
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, school with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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