Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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Dear Sir/Madam, The reason I am writing to you is the
jacket
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that I forgot in your cinema on 10th October
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2021. The movie was about the Bond series which was organized in the
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hall of the theatre. Particularly, I was too emotional after the
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scene, so, when I took my belongings, I left my
jacket
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there. My seat number was twenty-five and it was located on the
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row. The
jacket
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's colour is brown and it has a pocket on the left side which you can see my ID card there. It will be a disaster if I lose my Identification card since I have to reapply for a new one. It would mean a lot if you conduct research in the hall and keep it for me while you find it. I will send one of my friends to pick up that
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for me. Please let me know if you require more information. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Dorna Sadeghi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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