Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays the
way
we read is transformed through
technology
as Ebooks. Some people think that
this
technology
could substitute the traditional newspaper and magazines. I agree that in our modern life everything, as we used to
use
, is changing. On one hand, the
way
that we do
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things, in general, is changing because
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the incorporation of
technology
in our daily life.
Additionally
, some activities are not possible without
technology
such
as communication, education online, health diagnosis, home office.
Furthermore
, the
way
we used to read
also
is changing: we can read a big quantity of books
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a small device that keeps in our hand,
instead
to bring them physically. The purpose to
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technology
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is to make
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life easier.
Consequently
, always would be a replacement in the field that
technology
was applied.
For example
, the
use
of computers at work eliminated the
use
of paper, and now,
this
is saving a big amount of trees in the world. Another example
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is communications with the
use
of computers and the internet the communications could be shorter in time and easier than before. I totally agree that every day
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technology
is winning more and more space in our daily lives. In fact, sometimes we don´t have options and we have to change from the traditional
way
to
technology
way
.
For example
, with the pandemic and children's classes, we have to take classes online through the internet. To sum up,
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technology
and ebooks are changing the
way
that we used to read.
This
situation not only will replace the newspapers and magazines in
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short future, but
also
, the traditional books. I agree with
this
transformation that we are experienced little by little, but, there are
also
possibilities to still enjoy reading as the traditional form with a cup of coffee on a rainy day.
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