Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Working is a necessary portion

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throughout

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history. In

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concept, people develop multiple appearances of employment from personal work to

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organization.

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, today we could see the thrive of start-ups or entrepreneurs who abandon working in grant organisations. My essays will introduce some plausible reasons for

this

choice, followed by

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explanation for several possible drawbacks.

To begin

with, nowadays youngsters find working independently could satisfy their desire on

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as well as develop their crucial skills.

In other words

, after graduating from universities or after working in some companies for a while, young people may become unpleased to official regulations which either

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their intensive

dreams

in career or

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their energy in jobs;h

hence

beginning a new company could enable them to work independently without strict rules to

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their own

dreams

.

For example

, my old colleague who had

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quit

quite

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her job as an anonymous accountant established

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manufacture to produce dried mangos;

last

month, she was

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on

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channel as a rewarded young

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businesswoman

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.

Hence

,

dreams

play an ultimately important role on the path

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success.

Nevertheless

, starting up a brain-new facility could be "more harm than good" in some aspects. Since entrepreneurs may not appropriately estimate how strict the market is, their companies could be pushed to the verge of bankruptcy.

For instance

, "dried mangos" manufacture of my aforementioned colleague once faced

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a bad trick from her rivals, in which they made a

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on her hygienic safety procedures; after a mysterious campaign to prove her product quality, her factory overcame

this

difficulty, leaving behind an enormous budget for advertising to gain public belief.

Thus

, without deeply

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comprehensive

comprehending

the target market and potential dangers from competitors, young starters may fail to purchase the achievement. In conclusion, self_employment may be appealed to a major portion of workers in

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era. Chasing the

dreams

is always reasonable for the youth

to begin

their own facilities.

Nonetheless

, understanding their competitors is important, understanding their capability is much more vital.