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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situationsuch as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Different
people
 have different beliefs about certain situations. Some see half full, the other
people
 see half empty. Same idea for bad situations. Some
people
 think it's better to be satisfied with what they already have, like a dissatisfied
job
 or lack of money. For some
people
, it's important to appreciate what they've had. It's less challenging and more able to predict. Better to have a bad
one
 than nothing at all. For some others, accepting these is unacceptable,
life
 is short and full of struggles.
One
 has to try his best in order to embrace the
life
 he wants. Only saying yes to all issues is meaningless and a waste of time. Personally, I agree with the ones who challenge themselves more and would like to try harder to make some improvements. Staying where we are and taking what
life
 throws to us is relatively an easy option. All we need to do is to sit here and hope for the best. It's a comfort zone that even we don't feel comfortable inside. But taking another way, by taking adventure may very likely
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be much harder, but
also
 brings more fun and joy, especially when we conquer the obstacles and lead
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life
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 the direction we want. I have never done another stable
job
 after the
first
one
. Partly because I didn't know what I want when I graduated from college. Partly because of the curiosity about the world. Having a
job
, which was considered quite a good
one
 by many
people
, is nice. But it was not what I wanted for myself.
Therefore
 I tried different kinds of works, as
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 writer,
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bartender
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, as
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 specialist, in order to approach
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the idealist
one
 that my heart feels right about. It was not always an easy
job
 to change from
one
 position to a totally different
one
. But it makes me feel alive as I'm not using
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 situation as an excuse to stay where I was. I believe for many
people
 it's the same. The reason why they jumped out of the well, knowing that there will be difficulties ahead, simply because they want to know what is outside of that 1-inch-mouth that they've stared
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 day and all night. It's good to know that we can reach much bigger goals than we expected. It's about not giving in, not running away. It allows us to embrace more freedom.
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