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You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter -describe the problem -say how long it has been a problem -explain what action you want the neighbour to take

#neighbour #-describe #-say #-explain #action
Dear Neighbour, hope you are fine, it's been a long that we met. Even though we both are so occupied with our routines that we never get a chance to see each other even occasionally.
However
, I have been observing something
that is
 pinching me for a long.
Thus
 today I thought to write a letter about your driver who has been continuously creating nuisances for me and my family. Actually, despite instructing him a couple of times, he always parks the car just in front of my main gate.
Although
, sometimes gets so much pain to my nerve that mostly I get late for my office and my daughter
also
 gets irritated as her school starts at sharp 8.00AM.
However
, she complained plenty of times as she has to wait for 10 to 15 min as the man parks the car and goes back to his quarter. Almost a month has gone , but nothing put an ear to him. So,
finally
 , I have decided to tell you about his stubbornness.
Although
,we have been residing together for the past 10 years and these matters won't affect our relationship.but, As I really want you to either tell him or guide him to park the car at the left-hand side of your main gate rather at our entrance.
Thus
 ,I am hoping to see a positive response with constructive action . Thank you, Your friend, James
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