Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from our own knowledge or experience.

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Number

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of individuals are working for

extended

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an extended

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period

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periods

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and have no

time

for hobbies.

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essay agrees that working

overtime

have disadvantages over advantages due to not assisting to find personal interest.

This

essay clarifies the disadvantages like

burnout

and fatigue;

thereafter

, it discusses how

overtime

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can lead to career progression. Prolong period of activities at

workplace

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the workplace

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may lead

towards

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to

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burnout

.

Burnout

happens due to

laboring

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long-

time

, which ultimately hurt employees’ output;

consequently

, following personal passion is impossible.

Furthermore

,

extended

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phase of employment enhances boredom and tiredness. Boredom and exhaustion create mental issues;

subsequently

, workers suffer mental-health issues and need psychiatrist assistance due to

this

illness.

For example

,

Mental

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health association has claimed that over 80% of employees, who do not spend

time

on hobbies, may suffer boredom and tiredness at work after a certain

time

.

Therefore

,

overtime

employment has the issue related to

burnout

and fatigue among workers.

In contrast

to fatigue and

burnout

,

overtime

indicates

toward

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career progression. Professional developments

happened

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when someone meets the deadline and achieve the target by toiling hard;

subsequently

, achieving the targets and meeting deadlines ensure promotion;

therefore

, job advancement in life.

Furthermore

, not

following

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interest will assist

having

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in having

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extended

time

of sleep, and focus will be

centered

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on one area;

consequently

,

chance

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the chance

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of success enhances. In Bangladesh,

for instance

, one of the local magazines

Executive

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has published an article where it appraises professionals, who are merely focused on office activities rather than following hobbies. To conclude, extra

time

working can assist in career progression, indeed.

On the other hand

, toiling

prolong

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period

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periods

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at

workplace

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the workplace

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by employees will lead towards

burnout

as they do not participate

on

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in

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their private

interest

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interests

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.