It has become more easier and more affordable for people to travel to other countries. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples from your experience.

In the globalised epoch, travelling is considered

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a profound captivating activity. With the progressing of

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, the opportunities to travel

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increase at an alarming rate.

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I believe that it leads the people towards the countless avails, the detrimental impacts of

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not only on the evolution of a nation but

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on the inhabitants can not be neglected. Analysing the statement and explaining

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there are myriad

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positive enhancements by

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and foremost is that

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the attitude of people can be altered by

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of exploration,

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they are more likely to respect the etiquette

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the worldwide by exploring there culture and traditions. Another striking factor in

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regard is that

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the

livehood

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livelihood

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of masses is completely incumbent on the travelling as an outcome golden chances of

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are raised by it.

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as an adroit leader by allowing to learn new languages and numerous aptitude from a variety of nations.

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but not least is that

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international tourism

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an imperative role in the development of a country economy.

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, a survey, which was monitored in 2018, found that

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generated by Dubai when about 90 million commuters visited there. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems from the fact that, more travelling works as a mother of dire environmental issues and a

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to global warming as well. What is more, it gives an invitation to the illegal activities, since it was observed that the attacker who attacked the Taj Hotel, in India, was identified as a terrorist and he reached there as a

sightseeker

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sight seeker

.

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, the burden on the shoulders of a country administration

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increase

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in order to prevent the travellers from the dangers which can be

encountred

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encountered

by them during their journey. To conclude, according to the deliberation aforementioned above, in my ideology tourism is a vital aspect for the economical growth,

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however

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it has both positive and negative effects.