Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals present the view that accepting the negative condition,
such
as lack of satisfaction in a job or less money, is better than changing it, whereas others believe we should do something for altering the bad conditions rather than accept it. I strongly agree with the latter opinion. On the one hand, some people justifiably argue that we are responsible for staying or quitting from bad situations. From a psychological viewpoint, our power of thoughts to changing conditions is undeniable.
Thus
, thinking positive is more likely to help us to alter the unpleasant
situation
. One of my friends,
for instance
, ran into a financial issue
last
year. Due to the fact that he had a powerful mind and never gave up, he was able to overcome that
situation
and change that to a better
situation
.
Additionally
, he did a lot of effort to reach a high-quality level of life and succeed.
On the other hand
, another group of people claim that staying in a bad
situation
and accepting numerous negative effects of
such
a
situation
may be better. They insist that they are unable to change the
situation
.
However
, I do not find
this
argument convincing. Their attitudes may stem from a lack of awareness of human inner power and underestimating it so they should be informed regarding
this
matter. If they undertake the responsibility for their life, they will be able to boost the unsuitable conditions to suitable ones. To conclude, in my opinion, we can use our natural abilities to make situations pleasure for ourselves. These days, we are aware of positive a mindset. So, with changing attitudes from negative to positive, reaching a high standard of living is inevitable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contentment
  • Resilience
  • Personal growth
  • Endurance
  • Initiative
  • Advancement
  • Catalyst
  • Financial stability
  • Status quo
  • Innovation
  • Missed opportunities
  • Life satisfaction
  • Adverse situations
  • Taking control
  • Risk assessment
  • Change management
  • Self-improvement
  • Motivation
  • Stagnation
  • Proactivity
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