Some people believe that internationals sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation.others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense.To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some commentators argue that intercontinational sporting forums are the best platform to showcase the qualities that the host

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has to the rest of the world.Whereas, another school of thought are for the opinion these

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consume a lot of expenditure.From my point of view,holding worldwide sports contribute to

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and increase the local revenue collection.

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with, organising sporting

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have numerous advantage

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the hosting

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,the

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bring people from far and wide

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allowing several visitors to come from different countries.,

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these people would want to explore the diverse scenery that

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industry is boosted drastically by not only advertising itself to the rest of the world but

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showing the diversity that exists.

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,the recent world junior challenge held within the city increased the number of tourists paying Kenya a visit.

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,the city collected the highest revenue in that month.According to ,experts the collection amount increased by 20% comparatively.

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, international sports promote

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and increase the economy.

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,another school of thought oppose the idea of hosting the worldwide games. Owing to the fact that they consume a lot of funds in terms of preparing the playgrounds.Another reason,several visitors in the city cause traffic congestion and

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wasting valuable time for improving the economy.

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,the traffic gum experienced during the Africa cup of nations.

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having the sports neither support the economy nor improve the revenue allocation. In summary, sporting activities are the best platform for showcasing what the host

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has and improving the

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sector,

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, measures should be put in place to counter the challenges that accompany the sporting

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