In many countries, traditional food is replaced by international fast food. This has adverse effect families, individuals and society. Do you agree or disagree

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In the vast majority of countries around the world, junk
foods
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not only have been wiping out the local
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but
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have had an influence on
people
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and society.
This
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essay agrees that fast
foods
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have had a bad influence on everything.
families
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relationships and health are the most important reasons
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why not use fast
foods
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. On one hand, today, most
people
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around the world are struggling with obesity and various diseases because of consuming ready meals.
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junk
foods
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save a
lot
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of
time
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and energy especially for employees who do not have enough
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for cooking, they contain a
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of harmful ingredients which would bring obesity and cardiovascular disease for individuals.
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, in 2010, New York Times reported, more than 83
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of American citizens were diagnosed with cancers
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of eating too much fast food rather than homemade
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.
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, quick
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have an impact on
families
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too. For cooking traditional
foods
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families
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' members should spend a
lot
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of
time
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with each other, so, the bond's between them are too strong.
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, preparing ready meals does not need a
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of
time
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to spend or energy to consume and they could be eaten quickly.
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,
people
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will not communicate with each other a
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and
this
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situation would make them isolated.
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, Iranian
families
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have a strong connection with each other because the average
time
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that they spend together having food is about 1 hour. In conclusion, today, junk
foods
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not only could be harmful to
people
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's health and put them into dangerous health situations but
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could vanish
families
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' connection by causing them to spend less
time
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with each other.
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