The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that

the

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society is inundated with

advertisements

which

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seems

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to be merely useless and even pose other hazards. In my opinion,

although

advertises

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might be unuseful, they can bring some advantages to people. On the one hand, one of the most negative impacts of ads is

trigger

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a wasteful spending habit.

For example

, the ultimate

aims

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of advertising

is

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are

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stimulating

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potential customers to buy products and services. It is no doubt that most customers could be persuaded by attractive

advertisements

cosisting

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consisting

of stunning pictures, rich content, special effects. They,

then

, can impulsively try to afford items they have no need of.

Consequently

,

This

wastes money, time, which leads to overconsumption trends due to the existence of advertising.

On the other hand

, the obvious benefits from

advertisements

cannot be denied.

Firstly

,

this

media bombardment could help consumers make wisely

puchase

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purchase

decisions.

This

is because they can search and compare the prices of commodities before shopping or generally look for the cheapest one of

the

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similar quality.

Secondly

, the

advertises

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advertisements

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are posted not only for commercial purposes

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but

also

for public ones.

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reason behind

this

is some

advertisements

,

also

called public service announcements, help inform the general population of social issues,

such

as blood donation, environmental protection.

As a result

,

this

will contribute to better social

awarenes

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awareness

. In conclusion, people obviously obtain

advatanges

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advantages

of advertising from both economical and public sector. So, it

migh

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might

be unwise to prohibit all forms of commercial promotion because of some perceived disadvantages or irritations.