Some people say that when buying a product (e.g. a mobile/cell phone), or choosing a service (e.g. medical treatment), price is the most important thing to consider. Do you agree or disagree?
Several people believe that purchasing or selecting
a
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apply
goods
or services
is based on the prices. Topic - Buying product or selecting services
cl- Price to be considered what
is purchasing or selecting Capitalize word
What
services
for money
? To own or claim useful life related
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life-related
goods
or selecting
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select
services
like medical treatment as a service or product as mobile
phone. Why is it important to purchase a product or Add an article
a mobile
the mobile
selecting
a service for Wrong verb form
select
money
? People need to use this
significant purchases to survive their Correct determiner usage
these
life
or use Fix the agreement mistake
lives
this
as Correct pronoun usage
them
a daily
Correct the article-noun agreement
a daily life activity
daily life activities
life
activities or related work. How is this
done? It is settled with a medium of transaction, which is called money
. So, one can have their goods
or services
by paying with money
. A man purchases a mobile phone for his daily life
work and entertainment with his budgeted money
. Why is the price most
important thing to consider to Correct article usage
the most
buy
Wrong verb form
buying
goods
or services
? Why is the price is
not the most important thing to consider to Unnecessary verb
apply
buy
Wrong verb form
buying
goods
or services
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite