Some people say that when buying a product (e.g. a mobile/cell phone), or choosing a service (e.g. medical treatment), price is the most important thing to consider. Do you agree or disagree?

Several people believe that purchasing or selecting
a
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apply
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goods
or
services
is based on the prices. Topic - Buying product or selecting
services
cl- Price to be considered
what
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What
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is purchasing or selecting
services
for
money
? To own or claim useful
life related
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life-related
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goods
or
selecting
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select
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services
like medical treatment as a service or product as
mobile
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a mobile
the mobile
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phone. Why is it important to purchase a product or
selecting
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select
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a service for
money
? People need to use
this
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these
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significant purchases to survive their
life
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lives
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or use
this
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them
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as
a daily
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a daily life activity
daily life activities
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life
activities or related work. How is
this
done? It is settled with a medium of transaction, which is called
money
. So, one can have their
goods
or
services
by paying with
money
. A man purchases a mobile phone for his daily
life
work and entertainment with his budgeted
money
. Why is the price
most
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the most
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important thing to consider to
buy
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buying
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goods
or
services
? Why is the price
is
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apply
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not the most important thing to consider to
buy
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buying
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goods
or
services
?
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