The crime rate increasing nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime do you agree or disagree

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technology nowadays. Some

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evolution has led to a fall in the rate of crime,while I disagree with

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notion because there is no significant decrease in

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criminal activities,in

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they have risen enormously. To embark on,

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,the increasing rate of cybercrime is a major concern,after the improvement in the technology.To cite an example,prior to

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months,a group of

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misused

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technological advancement and robbed the

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for

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their money. They pretended as bank employers,called

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innocent

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to share their credit card and bank account details and stole hundreds of thousands of cash online.

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,there are some fake websites

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that are not secure.They say the public for online

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and later the users are left awestruck when they come to know

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those web pages have actually robbed them.

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,the number of kidnappings,street crime and

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have

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increased in the past few years,especially for ransom money, and

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modern technology contributes largely to

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increment.

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, the newly developed ammunition is

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used by some

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to spread terror in

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society and threaten the citizens. To conclude,

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the main reason for which the modernized gadgets are made has been left for behind,because of these, the number of fraudsters,kidnappers and street robbers have increased hugely and caretakers of the citizens have failed to provide security them with the actual benefits of

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advancement.