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Some people think that people moving to a new country should accept new culture in the foreign country rather than living as a separate minority group with different lifestyle. Do you agree or disagree?

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public tend to migrate to a new
provincial
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 for better opportunities and earn manifold. Migration has become a trend nowadays as plenty of people are thriving hard to achieve their dreams in another
provincial
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. Every
provincial
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 is diverse and there is a huge cultural difference in comparison. In
this
 essay, I would depict the cultural diversification as well as cultural shocks that individuals have to face after migrating to another
provincial
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. There are a plethora of reasons why people migrate to another
country
. One of the reasons is to earn and increase their status in society as well as some people believe that migrating would take them away from the societal pressure. Significantly, they tend to compare the culture of their home
country
 and their present
country
. They find a huge disparity in all walks of life.
However
, they find it quite difficult at the start but later adapt to the environment they are living in. It's better to adjust to the new culture as it won't make them feel out of place as well as there would be a sense of belonging.
Initially
, society is sceptical about involving themselves in cultural groups fearing non-acceptance. But unless they have a word with them, it's difficult to be among them in their events. They tend to be quite welcoming and has always a place for outsiders. The fear within makes them left out. It is better to be among them rather than living as a separate group.
For instance
, our neighbours had migrated to Canada for future prospects and the betterment of their children but they were unable to accept the cultural distinction which forced them to return back to India.
This
 was quite distressful as they were not mentally prepared for
such
 circumstances. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement that folk who tend to leave their
country
 for migrating to another
country
 should be mentally prepared to accept the cultural discrepancy and adjust to the population of that
country
 as it would help them be a part of their community and lead a better life henceforth.
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