You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months -say how your work could be done while you are away -ask for his/her in arranging in

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my strong interest in spending six months in the head office of
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company, where I
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currently am employed, located in Germany. As you might know, I graduated from
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the University
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of Toronto with a degree in business technology, but I have
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just concluded my master degree in international business trading,
reason
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why I would like to take
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opportunity I read, sur a vacancy in our company's website, to practice my fresh vast knowledge in
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specific area.
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, I could not be able to be gone for longer than
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period, since my mother is going to be taking care of my children for me, and she has her housework to do. As you can see from my resume,
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that
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is enclosed
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this
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letter, I have been conciliating my present job with
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internship at business trading. In
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way, I am already used to
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of work,
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why I can guarantee I will be
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delivering
all my assignments through our corporation mail and handling all my deadlines due the previsible time.
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, In spite of it, I would be very
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grateful
if you could, please, arrange
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for me, since you have
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closer contact with the
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Germany
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associates, as well as the leader whom I am going to be under his supervision. I look forward to meeting you in the near future.
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faithfully, Anna
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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