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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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,Despite all developments in the industry and economy  in many
countries
, there is still a huge number of unemployments among highly qualified people.
This
issue
 is the result of some major problems in the 
education
 system . To address
this
issue
 drastic measures  to alter the 
education
 sector should be taken. In many
countries
, it is difficult for
graduates
 to find a proper job because of discordance between
education
 and industry. lack of practical subjects and internships  in universities leads to a disadvantage of fresh highly qualified
graduates
 compared with experienced people. For solving
this
 problem some major changes in educational methods should be made. Universities of applied sciences in Germany is a good example of
this
 solution
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 because the curriculums of  these universities include project courses in cooperation with companies, mandatory internships, and classes taught by professionals from the respective industries. Lack of a balance between the number of
graduates
  and 
labour
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 market in different fields is another inefficiency of
education
 systems in several
countries
. Plenty of top
graduates
 find it hard to find a proper job due to the lack of enough jobs related to their fields of study in the market. ,
Unfortunately
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 some
countries
 apply entry exams to the profession for
graduates
 which make the situation even worse.
On the contrary
 to address
this
issue
 governments  should impose different sorts of limitations on entries of  some specific majors.  Overall, the
issue
 of unemployment among highly qualified people
roots
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 in the problems of the
education
 sector in many societies, which can be solved by some deformation in methods
education
, and impose of some rules on the
education
 system.
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