In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

,Despite all developments in the industry and economy  in many

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, there is still a huge number of unemployments among highly qualified people.

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is the result of some major problems in the 

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system . To address

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drastic measures  to alter the 

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sector should be taken. In many

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, it is difficult for

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to find a proper job because of discordance between

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and industry. lack of practical subjects and internships  in universities leads to a disadvantage of fresh highly qualified

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compared with experienced people. For solving

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problem some major changes in educational methods should be made. Universities of applied sciences in Germany is a good example of

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because the curriculums of  these universities include project courses in cooperation with companies, mandatory internships, and classes taught by professionals from the respective industries. Lack of a balance between the number of

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market in different fields is another inefficiency of

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systems in several

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. Plenty of top

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find it hard to find a proper job due to the lack of enough jobs related to their fields of study in the market. ,

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some

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apply entry exams to the profession for

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which make the situation even worse.

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to address

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governments  should impose different sorts of limitations on entries of  some specific majors.  Overall, the

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of unemployment among highly qualified people

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in the problems of the

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sector in many societies, which can be solved by some deformation in methods

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, and impose of some rules on the

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system.