Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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In recent years, there has been a debate over
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of various international
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competitions across the globe. While some people tend to believe that sport has no borders, and it is one of the means to improve an image of a certain state, others suggest that it gives
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favour to certain countries that violate human rights, and,
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, pose a threat to the international development. In
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I will discuss why it is important to ensure that sport is not a part of
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global politics and provide a list of the arguments that show why certain actors are interested to conduct sporting events in states that do not follow some provisions of the global humanitarian law. The fact that the
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Federation was chosen to be the host of the FIFA
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Cup 2018 sparked many speculations in the Western
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since
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sportsmen are being constantly blamed
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use
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drugs in
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competitions. Indeed, there has been some evidence of doping usage by some
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athletes in the previous years, but the international community put too much attention on the issue, making almost every person who is doing
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in Russia to be a user of a certain restricted medicament. The
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Cup in Russia,
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, proved everyone to be wrong since the
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Government managed to organise the event on the highest level, meeting the requirements of the various international
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organisations, while the attendees of the competition were so surprised to find that everything that was written in the newspapers was a myth.
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and some states are interested to discredit certain countries that do not want to follow the will of others.
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, we should not forget that there are specific countries in the
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that do not share the values of
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Western civilization, and,
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why
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they just do not make any sense to them.
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Cup is planned to be carried out in Qatar
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believed to be constantly violating the rights of women and minorities. Indeed, for some representatives of the international organisations that do want to promote
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humanitarian law in the
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nonsense since everyone should follow the same rules.
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by the treaties, and states or organisations, in
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Qatar that has a significant number of oil reserves, could manage to ensure their participation in various international events by paying the certain actors. In conclusion, I do believe that the international community should ensure the equal and proper participation of every state in
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sports
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competition since it is one of the means to improve the relations between the nations.
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, the corruption methods that, sometimes, guarantee a state to be the host of an international event, should be totally restricted since they destroy the spirit of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic boost
  • infrastructure
  • national pride
  • cultural showcase
  • inspire a generation
  • temporary boost
  • environmental concerns
  • sustainable planning
  • public funds
  • divert resources
  • tourism influx
  • job opportunities
  • sports development
  • public health
  • construction
  • strategic investment
  • global audience
  • hospitality
  • public services
  • cost-benefit analysis
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