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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university Recommend the best way for him/ her to look for accommodation Warn him/her of mistaken students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear Aysan, How are things with you? I have missed you a lot. I am so glad to guide you
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 where you can stay for
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 time. When I was a student at the same university as you, I used to inhabit
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an apartment near the University. It was close not only to the bus stop but
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 to the train station. I found my home from a popular application which is established for foreign pupils. Exploring
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 program helps you to discover affordable prices and excellent locations. If I were you, I would have counsel whit my professor who is in charge of the space you want to live in about the cost. It leads to saving your energy and time. I am waiting to make your mind. Best wishes, Zahra
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