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some people say that children should star learning a foreign language when they are 7 years old, but other believe that they should start when they are 18 years old. discuss both views and write your opinion.

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These days, one of the debatable issues is what ages would be fitted for starting a new
language
, some people believe that 7 years old is the best
age
, while others feel youngsters should begin it at
age
 18.
However
, there are many interpretations about
this
 phenomenon which come from the experiences of people, but I am of the opinion that children’s
mind
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 can be prepared to learn a new
language
 at an early
age
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next
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this
 essay. Advocates of the
first
 view express their idea
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reason that young people under the
age
 of 18 can still show great skill at mastering the new
language
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 in grammatical part , some researches which conducted by American linguistics explain that human can learn and analyze a
second
language
 when they start school, as a matter of
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 they believe the older you get the more difficult it is to learn a structure of new languages and
also
 the proficiency of learning can be increased in young ages.
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 group has an opposite prospect about
this
 issue, they believe there is a critical window for a child in earlier ages to learn a foreign
language
. children have to focus on their native
language
 until they
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universities
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 because their
mind
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 are more organized to handle a new
language
.
Furthermore
,
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this
age
 youngsters are able to choose their
second
language
 with an extension horizon that what kind of
language
 can be more appropriate for their future occupation. In conclusion, regardless
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 has been discussed there are some advantages and disadvantages
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 both views, my opinion is more alike to
first
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 group because some positive points have been existed which worth considering to compare with the
second
 one.
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