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Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

#parents #work #countries #families #development
In the modern era of globalisation, moving overseas with
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families to get high paid and more stable jobs is getting popular. I strongly
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 that
advantages
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 of these outweigh
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the disadvantages
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. I shall shed the light on various merits
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 to get
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 education
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 the children, learning new cultures and languages and demerits
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forgetting
for getting
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 roots .
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 and
thus
 will lead to a logical conclusion. To embark on it ,
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 and the foremost reason behind my opinion is that an individual along with their family will get many better amenities in healthcare , schooling, sports, jobs in
camparison
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comparison
 to native country . They will learn more
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 skills and technologies which may not be present in their hometown.For an instance, An article published in The Tribune in 2019 reveals that more
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 80%
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 were benefited
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 living abroad and learning new skills made them more economically stable Another striking feature of living overseas is learning new languages and cultures by meeting foreigners and getting adapted to their culture.These could bring numerous benefits
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 their personalities and help in
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horizons
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 of their communication. A piece of evidence of it is
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 survey conducted by New York University in
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 2020 in which thousands of migrants along with their families expanded
thier
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their
 businesses globally by learning communication overseas.
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, there are some disadvantages of settling abroad
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moral
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 and heritage of one's country which
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 lead to losing one's identity with respect to culture. They will not be able to serve their motherland in any
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the
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way
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. In conclusion, there are more advantages of going to other nation along with their
familes
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families
 as aforementioned with some disadvantages as well. But in my perspective growing globally with the rapid changing world will be more advantageous to an individual.
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