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You are going to another country to study. you would like to do a part-time job while you are studying , so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. write a letter to this friend. give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part time job suggest how your friend could help you to find a job

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Dear Jerry, How are you doing? I am writing to let you know that I will be coming over to Ghana to study. I got an offer to study Business Administration at Ghenghen University, is a postgraduate diploma program and it's for two years, isn't that amazing? While studying at the university, I would like to get a part-time job. I found out that I would need some extra funds to cover my tuition fees. I have some part of the tuition fees with me, but a part-time job would be great to help make it up; it would be helpful for some upkeeps
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. Since you live in
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 area where the University is located, can you kindly guide me, how can I get a part-time job? You can try by introducing me to some of your colleagues that own bookstores or restaurants; I can be a Customer client representative or a front desk officer. What do you suggest? Do kindly let me know your view of
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. Thanks a lot for your help all the while. I am grateful. Yours dearly, Rotimi
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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