In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. what measures could be taken to prevent this?

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of

factory

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factories

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and construction in a large number of

industry

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countries

,

air

and

water

have a lot of

toxin

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.

This

is mainly because of the lack of responsibility of

industry

owners

and difficulty collecting and destroying

toxin

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that is

the result of

industries

. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to decrease

pollution

in the

environment

.

Firstly

, the reason for

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quality

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of

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in

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developing

countries

,

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is due to the lack of responsibility of

industry

owners

. In the other words,

industry

owners

are not required to use clean energy and

decreasing

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carbon dioxide from

environment

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and

instead

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white increase production which only, decrease

quality

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of

air

and

water

.

Secondly

,

environment

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pollution

is

also

owing to the difficulty in collecting and destroying toxin

that is

the result of factory and construction.

As a result

, many

of

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industries

don’t invest in

pollution

control devices and

level

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of

pollution

increase in developing

countries

There are two effective solutions to the problem of

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quality

of

air

and

water

. One way to tackle

this

is ensuring that many taxes are levied on

industries

that produce a lot of

pollution

. By doing

this

,

industries

’

owner

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made to use

a

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clean energy and reduce carbon dioxide production. another method of growth

quality

of

air

and

water

is government reduce the price of devices that invest

pollution

from

air

and

water

so that industrials’

owners

can buy them.

this

solution would hopefully prevent from declining

quality

of

air

and

water

specially

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in developing

countries

. In conclusion, increasing taxes for environmentally polluting

industries

and

also

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the price of

pollution

absorbing

device

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devices

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are effective in dealing with the issue. If

government

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implemented these solutions,

air

and

water

pollution

would soon drop.