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Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better.They also can do many things that men can not.But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as mens,although thay have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career....it is said:A woman place is in the home.What do you think

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Females too can do what
malesd
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males
 can do, and even do it with excellence.Some people argue that they can do most of the things that male counterparts can not do.
Although
,the evidence available is that their work is not recognised as they offer services at the expense of their abode.As the adage says
women
 place is in their household.In my opinion,
women
 have equal opportunities just as men.
Therefore
, they should be allowed to exploit their potentials. The modern world has made several platforms for both gender and
women
 are not left behind in
this
 revolution.
Firstly
,the heavy machinery that
were
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was
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 associated with men can
also
 be driven by
women
.To illustrate
this
 the current superhighway being built involve both men and
women
.
For instance
,a recent research finding demonstrates that
women
 are the best drivers when it comes to the use of heavy tracks.
Secondly
,when it comes to honesty at work
women
 are deemed to be better because they remain accountable to every cash in the business.
For example
, in
quickmat
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quick mat
 supermarkets all the counter personnel are
women
.
Therefore
,
women
 are good at handling heavy machinery and
also
 trustworthy comparatively.
Nevertheless
,some individuals are for the idea that
women
 place is in their abode because they are the ones who take care of the children.
Although
,
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 the duties can be delegated,some believe that children can only be comfortable at the feet of their mums.
Furthermore
,it is the ladies who take care of their husbands owing to the fact that they are married to be at home.
Thus
,the place of
women
 is in their household. In summary,ladies should be given equal opportunity in the current world in order to exploit their abilities in the construction field and businesses.
Moreover
,having
women
 at home will limit
this
 possibility.
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