Nowadays, people get information through news and papers, but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or correspondent have?

In
this
technological era , a vast section of society receive information through
news
Add an article
the news
show examples
of
Change preposition
on
show examples
tv, radio, newspaper and many more but
sometime
Replace the word
sometimes
show examples
it is not flawlessly
truth
Replace the word
true
show examples
. Masses can trust
on
Change preposition
apply
show examples
journalist
which they
are deliver
Change the verb form
are delivered
are delivering
show examples
and
another
Correct quantifier usage
other
show examples
things
Replace the adjective
thing
show examples
is
Change the verb form
are
show examples
journalists have amiable qualities of truthness whatever they put in media. In
this
discourse, I will articulate both prominent points
with
Change preposition
apply
show examples
profoundly in forthcoming paragraphs before reaching
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
an appropriate recapitulation. At the onset,
news
Add an article
the news
show examples
is extremely imperative to all folks due to
depend
Change the verb form
depending
show examples
on
news
Add an article
the news
show examples
they thinking about their future.
Moreover
,
most
Change preposition
in most
show examples
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
cases journalists declare
news
which
Correct pronoun usage
that
show examples
is
base
Wrong verb form
based
show examples
on
live
Add an article
a live
show examples
phenomenon so that definitely that
news
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
always correct .To elucidate it ,some of the
news
which is on social matters and pertinent of family matters ,that type of
news
can be wrong due to
sometime
Correct your spelling
sometimes
show examples
they complete their newspaper pages to allow useless
news
. To prototype, in corona pandemic situation all
news
about how many individuals died in one day so
public
Add an article
the public
show examples
did not believe
on
Change preposition
in
show examples
them due to it was erroneous
news
.
On the other hand
,
although
journalist
is
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
exceedingly paramount to all person due to without them they cannot get prominent
news
about whatever
happening
Add a missing verb
is happening
show examples
surrounding
by
Change preposition
apply
show examples
them .To be precise, they are merely
Add an article
a source
show examples
source
Fix the agreement mistake
sources
show examples
of getting indispensable
news
and they always speak
truth
Add an article
the truth
show examples
in front of
public
Add an article
the public
show examples
. To illustration, in India most of the
news
about education,
journalist
Fix the agreement mistake
journalists
show examples
declare perfect
news
due to
Correct word choice
because
show examples
it is a serious thing and
this
all depends
of
Change the preposition
on
show examples
country's
Correct article usage
the country's
show examples
future. It is a most powerful tool to get develops our country. By agglomerating
above
Correct article usage
the above
show examples
discussion, I
finally
pen down saying that
news
which is spread by
journalist
Add an article
a journalist
the journalist
show examples
.It is very important for
public
Correct article usage
the public
show examples
.If
news
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
deterioration ,all masses follow them and it would be
wrong
Change the article
the wrong
show examples
impact to our region.
Submitted by Trusha.p on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: