The media pays too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead. To what extend to you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people spend a lot of
time
watching news
regarding stars Correct article usage
the news
such
as actors, musicians or athletes. However
, some think they should spend more time
reporting the life
of simple subjects. I totally agree with this
, and in this
essay, I am going to write why I think is more important to report normal people's life
.
Despite the fact of a celebrities life
is more interesting, reporters should live more space for them to live their daily life
. This
is because many times paparazzi would invade their days asking them for news
, so they can report them to the crowd. Famous rock bands ,for instance
, are almost banned to live their life
like a normal human beings
, because of media interruptions. Correct the article-noun agreement
normal human beings
a normal human being
Therefore
we should have more news
about ordinary persons, that could even give us more informative news
Remove the redundancy
apply
news
.
If we they would show more information regarding daily subjects, a person would to
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apply
have
get more knowledge. When we only rely on famous celebrities, we end up Add the particle
tohave
on
having fake Change preposition
apply
news
most of the time
but also
it doesn't give us any informative pieces of information. Such
as how the citizens live, giving good reports and sometimes tips on how to have e better living or even know what is happening around the world, and learn from different cultures. Altough
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Although
this
can be boring for some it would be really informative for others.
In conclusion, reporters pay too much attention to famous groups, without realising how important could be to report normal crowd information. In my opinion, I find it more interesting known
what other Change the verb form
to know
pepole
like me do Correct your spelling
people
on
their free Change preposition
in
time
or inform myself
about others Correct pronoun usage
me
culturs
.Correct your spelling
cultures
culture
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