It is often said that governments spend too much money on project to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?
In
21st
century Change the article
the 21st
wildlife
is extinct in some particular region whereas in some region
it is near about
vanish. Nowadays, Fix the agreement mistake
regions
this
topic has become a hot topic in
all around the Change preposition
apply
world
. One school of thought reckons that governments
had spent a large amount of money to conserve wildlife
, while there are lots of another problems
that are much more important than Replace the adjective
another problem
other problems
wildlife
projects. I completely agree with this
given notion. The facts of the thesis are demonstrated in upcoming paragraphs.
Consider Broadly, wildlife
is an important part of earth
life cycle every living being that are
living on Change the verb form
is
earth
is attached with each other either directly or indirectly. Governments
know this
thing very well if they did not maintain the lifecycle of wildlife
it may be harmful for
everyone. For an instance, in Change the preposition
to
whole
Add an article
the whole
world
the cutting of trees and forest
is increasing day by day due to Fix the agreement mistake
forests
this
activity at large scale number earth
had losted
important animal species that are important for human Correct your spelling
lost
being
like in Fix the agreement mistake
beings
medical
sector.
Correct article usage
the medical
In addition
, the other problems that are occuring
in Correct your spelling
occurring
world
Add an article
the world
is
not much important Change the verb form
are
then
conserving Correct your spelling
than
wildlife
because if any life cycle is disturbed in earth
there will be high chances of natural disaster on Add an article
the earth
earth
. For example
, global warming is happening on earth
and temperature
of Correct article usage
the temperature
earth
is continuously increasing daily due to high increments in temperature glacier start melting and rivers or ocean start overflowing and more chances of floods are Add an article
the earth
occuring
in Correct your spelling
occurring
world
. Add an article
the world
Moreover
, animals also
help to test the new
developed medicine because Change the adjective
newly
human
being was Add an article
the human
also
an animal in past times its
now changed due to the genetic changes done by nature. To illustrate, Covid - 19 vaccine Correct pronoun usage
it
first
trials done
on rats because rats Add a missing verb
were done
has
seen the same Change the verb form
have
genectic
genes by scientists.
To conclude, Correct your spelling
genetic
wildlife
is the foremost important thing for governments
nowdays
relatively another problem is not much Correct the word
nowadays
neccesary
. Correct your spelling
necessary
Wildlife
is an important part of earth
lifecycle so, Correct article usage
the earth
governments
are focusing to conserve wildlife
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