People who travel to another country to live, work or study for a period of time often suffer badly from homesickness. Why is this? What are the best ways to reduce this problem?

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Sometimes
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face a necessity for travelling abroad in order to get a degree, maintain their job and live for a while which boils down to the problem
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as homesickness.In
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I will explain what is the cause and outline some solutions.
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,
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start to miss their homes because of losing support from close
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. A new place where individuals do not know anyone can be sometimes stressful.
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, when a student after high school starts to live by themselves in a foreign country without knowing a language could feel confused.
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,back at home, it would be easier for a student to integrate into
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adult life with supportive parents behind him/her. The main solution is making new friends in the new place. When
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,who moved to the new place, start to communicate to local residents challenges they faced before become less complicated.
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, my friend .who moved to Venice due to her bachelor degree, at
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cried a lot and felt like someone who really miss her home and would return as soon as possible.
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, she started to get in touch with her Italian neighbours and
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realized how friendly they are.
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acquaintance
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you are, so you do not feel
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and stop missing your home. To sum up, some
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feel
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when they are separated from their houses for some period of time.
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,
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can get through those concerns by chatting with humans who surround them at the destination.
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