GT A friend of yours has recently written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem at your workplace in the past. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell your friend how you feel about the problem explain how you faced a similar situation in the past suggest possible solutions to the problem

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Dear Alex, Hope you and your family are doing well. I have been writing to you in correspondence to the letter you sent me regarding the issue you have been facing at your workplace, I really hope it could assist you to sort out the issues you have been encountering, recently. Undoubtedly, I feel sad about the problem you have to tackle and I know it's really arduous to handle

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issues in the hectic schedule that we have been leading. Sometimes, it is really frustrating as I have been through

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phase.

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year, I

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through a similar situation as I

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to commute to the construction site on a daily basis for inspection and sample collection.

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, I know it`s hard to travel a long distance daily and be left with no time for other important work.

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, I would suggest you provide some alternatives to your employer, so they could send someone else in place of you.

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, you need to explain them to appropriately how

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change has been impacting your work and performance,

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, they

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understand your circumstances. Wish you all the best and take care. Best wishes, Georgia Henry.

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task achievement

Try to expand on your feelings towards the problem in more detail, expressing empathy and understanding.

coherence and cohesion

Consider improving the logical progression of your paragraphs to ensure smoother transitions between ideas.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to keep your sentences varied and engaging for better flow. This could help improve the flow of your writing.

coherence and cohesion

Your greeting and closing are well-crafted, making the letter feel warm and personal.

task achievement

You provided relevant personal experience, which strengthens your advice and adds credibility.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

198 words

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