Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you. Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.

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Dear Nina, My English teacher told me you need a

pen friend

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, so I decided to write to you , that I will like to be your

pen friend

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penfriend

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. My name is Rosemary. I am 25 years old and from Imo state in Nigeria. I work in a financial servicing company. I live with my parents in

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city of Portharcourt in rivers state. I work Mondays to Friday and have weekends to rest. My hobbies and interests are not so much, but the very great ones I enjoy

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watching

movies

most especially romantic

movies

and

action packed

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movies

like American Navy seals

movies

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hunters Killers. Watching

movies

makes me relax especially when I am pressured. I

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love listening to Christian music which lifts my spirit and brings

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close to God anytime I listen to them.

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, I love going to the cinema and to the beaches. Enough of me , kindly tell me about yourself, your likes and dislikes and

also

your interest

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life and all. I will look forward to hearing from you. Best Wishes. Rosemary

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

185 words

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Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you. Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

"The qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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Some parents think computer games are better for children and they should be allowed to play more of them. whereas some parents argue that they are harmful to children. Discuss both views.

many people work long hour leaving very little time to leisure activities.what are the advantage and disadvantage