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Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some people suppose that
students
 who perform well in their examinations should receive
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a reward
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reward
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, others believe that it is significant to prize
students
 who
show
 great progress. In my opinion, I agree with
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the school
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school
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schools
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 should
reward
students
 who
show
 improvement. On one side of the argument, there are people who believe that
students
 with the best academic results should be rewarded.
Firstly
, rewards could create
highly
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 competitive education environment that will keep learners studying hard and motivate them to acquire more and more knowledge. It could encourage
students
make
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 an effort to study hard for the best score.
Furthermore
, it is a big helpful thing for many poor
students
 and having won prizes in school make them active in studies.
For example
, in many big educational institutions in Vietnam, the best
students
 had a lot of benefits from their performance
such
 as
more
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better opportunities in future,
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 abroad, scholarship, take part in
national
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the national
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 competition.
On the other hand
, it is necessary for schools to
reward
students
 who
show
 improvement.
Firstly
, when schools
reward
students
 who
show
 enhancement, they will be received people's
encourage
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.
Therefore
,
students
 will improve their study results that bring more
favorable
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 outcomes.
For instance
, because of wanting to gain a prize, these learners would invest more time and effort into their studies, which is likely to gradually increase their fascination for academic disciplines.
Hence
, learning results will become higher than the previous one. In conclusion,
the
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rewards are becoming an important role in human and society developments. Schools should attempt to
reward
 not only
students
 showing the best academic achievements but
also
 those who make efforts.
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