Most Modern Families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents What is the reason for this? What problems can this cause?
Nowadays, in our society
children
have less connection with their Use synonyms
parents
due to both Use synonyms
parents
are working ,and it makes problems in their relationship. I want to render some reasons and suggest to my opinion about Use synonyms
this
decision.
On the one hand, those who support Linking Words
this
idea claim that both Linking Words
parents
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work
outside of Wrong verb form
working
home
can cause various problems. Add an article
the home
a home
Firstly
, these days the living cost is increasing and Linking Words
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parent
have to Fix the agreement mistake
parents
work
to prepare a better life for their Use synonyms
children
. Use synonyms
For instance
, if Linking Words
children
want to go Use synonyms
Privet
University ,or they want to have a better Change preposition
to Privet
educational
their Replace the word
education
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parent
need Fix the agreement mistake
parents
paying
good money for them. Change the verb form
to pay
Although
they are working together to earn extra money, they cannot Linking Words
enough
free time and Add a missing verb
have enough
this
might have a negative impact on Linking Words
children
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, while both Linking Words
parents
are working, Use synonyms
children
may be lonely at home and if Use synonyms
parents
neglect to control their Use synonyms
children
in order to lack attention may direct Use synonyms
children
to criminal activities. For Use synonyms
this
reason, at least one of two Linking Words
parents
should be staying more time at home , and they are nurturing as well as they can.
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On the other hand
, when Linking Words
parents
don’t spend enough time Use synonyms
for
Change preposition
on
children
‘s upbringing, especially mother. Use synonyms
Although
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children
want Use synonyms
the
high quality of life facility, they need more Correct article usage
a
parents
attention and support than anything else. For one Use synonyms
thing
Add a comma
,thing
children
need emotional Use synonyms
interact
with their Replace the word
interaction
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parent
and Fix the agreement mistake
parents
parents
have significant impacts on the process of shaping the personalities of their Use synonyms
children
. When Use synonyms
Children
are working with Use synonyms
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parents
they feel much more confident and independent and Correct pronoun usage
their parents
this
is helpful to their future life. Linking Words
In addition
, sometimes Linking Words
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parent
are like working and they want to be more socialized So they can help from babysitters, or with grandparents Fix the agreement mistake
parents
also
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parent
Fix the agreement mistake
parents
make
Change the verb form
makes
balance
between Add an article
a balance
the balance
work
and family. I believe that while Use synonyms
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parent
is working as a professional Add an article
the parent
a parent
work
it brings more advantages to the Use synonyms
children
Financial situation of the whole family will be improved, Use synonyms
children
can learn hard Use synonyms
work
from their Use synonyms
parents
and Use synonyms
also
it has many benefits for the Linking Words
parents
themselves.
In conclusion, if Use synonyms
parents
balance between Use synonyms
work
and family their Use synonyms
children
’s development are certain to be guaranteed.Use synonyms
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