You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter - explain why you changed jobs - describe your new job - tell him/her your other news

Dear Stuart, It seems like ages we have not met each other and time indeed flies quickly. I am very sorry that I had not been in touch with you as I had been terribly busy. I hope
this
letter finds you in good health. I am writing
this
letter to you that I have joined RMA Myanmar as Human Resources Manager
last
two months ago. Among the facts that the reason why I decided to change the job was I would like to get multinational experiences before my age turns to 30s. Even though there have only two months here, I would say that it is absolutely fantastic and gets incredible experiences working at
such
a group of companies. By the way, I have to go to Thailand
next
quarter and will be there for three months in order to attend some training
such
as Organization Development and Leadership which are organized by the RMA Group. I wish we two can meet in Thailand and looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours sincerely, Honey Linn
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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