In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

New houses are required for people, but there is little room without
village
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a village
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. Many individuals believe that
villages
should be protected.
This
essay agrees with
this
opinion as the destruction of
villages
will lead to
loss
of farming
land
and building house will
result
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loss
of scenic
beauty
as a result
. One of the biggest disadvantages to
build
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building
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a house
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house
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in
countryside
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the countryside
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will be
loss
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the loss
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of farming
land
.
Loss
of farming
land
will lead to
poor
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a poor
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living
standard
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standards
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for farmers and the
food
price
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prices
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increase for the locals. So, building houses in
village
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is a self-destructive option in my view.
For example
, the
food
price, especially rice,
have
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increased by 20% in Bangladesh during
last
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decade, which has
caused
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due to the drop of farming
land
in
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the village
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village
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villages
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according to
Bangladesh
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the Bangladesh
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Rice Research Institute.
Hence
, the farming
land
use for
building
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the building
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is not viable.
Besides
, these
villages
are the main source of our daily
food
in case of losing
farm
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farmland
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land
; imported
food
source
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sources
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will increase the price of
food
and our living standard
as a result
. Another disadvantage is the
loss
of scenic
beauty
of
villages
.
Scenic
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green environment will be lost if the building homes
encouraged
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inside
countryside
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the countryside
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. These
villages
attract lots of visitors from foreign as well as city dwellers, which helped to improve the economy of the
villages
.
For example
, Haor has earned
significant
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amount of visitors cause of its scenic
beauty
according to the Daily Mirror of Bangladesh. In conclusion, building
house
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houses
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in the countryside could be a terrible idea as
villages
will be losing farming
land
and will
subsequently
lead to
lack
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a lack
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of
food
source
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sources
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and losing scenic
beauty
will not help to improve our living
standard
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standards
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.
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