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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. Your talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter: • Remind him when and where you met • Tell him what kind of job you are interested in • Say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Sir, Thanks for your
time
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the time
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 to read
this
 letter. I am writing you relate to the job position that you told me to contact you for your restaurant. I met you during my visit to
Dubai
in
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 the morning flight from Dhaka on Saturday. We met each other as we have the same seat allocated by the airline authority by mistake. During our exchange of greetings, you asked me about my profession and introduced yourself
subsequently
. According to our discussion, you have offered me
managerial
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a managerial
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 position in one of your restaurants located in
Dubai
 as you are struggling to find
multilingual
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a multilingual
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 manager to improve customer experience in the
Dubai
 restaurant during their visit.
In addition
, I have a diploma in communication
skill
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skills
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 where I have learned how to interact with the complaining customer and solve different issues relate to
complain
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.
Besides
, It
also
educate
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educates
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 me
how
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on how
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 communication
skill
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skills
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 can enhance
company’s
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a company’s
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 reputation. I would be very happy to lead your restaurant in
Dubai
 and increase revenue if I have the opportunity from you. Waiting for your response. Sincerely
Toriqul
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Torque
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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