An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own pourer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?
More and more
people
who are essential for their developing countries
, because of their professional careers,emigrate from their countries
to developed ones. This
issue can cause several problems for their motherlands, but drastic measures by proof countries
can solve the problem.
Firstly
Some people
such
as doctors and teachers are crucial for developing their countries
because of the effect that they have on the future of every single individual in the society. A society can improve the conditions, that firstly
being mentally and physically healthy, and secondly
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high educated. Correct your spelling
being
People
of a country should be healthy and be educated and aware about improving the conditions . So lack of professional such
as doctors and teachers, who are vital respectively in health care and education systems, finally
affect the future of a nation and stop steps of development. Secondly
, countries
spend a huge amount of money to educate people
from the first
day of school until graduation from a university to be beneficial for their country. professionals emigration send the results of spending all of this
money to rich countries
. For instance
, nowadays a huge number of highly educated medical professionals leave my hometown Iran for a better life in western countries
who used free education for a long period in medical state schools.Submitted by cena.m.89 on
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